直接
阳光的出走
拉紧了
白天的死结
最后一根松动的线
当安全的地方不再安全
危险也不那么危险
欲望的出口
与理智的入口之间
立着一个
箭头
- Re: 直接posted on 03/29/2005
笨笨的诗象线条简单,色彩鲜明的动画。我现在脑子里就是一大箭头。==> :-) - Re: 直接posted on 03/30/2005
笨笨 wrote:
直接
阳光的出走
拉紧了
白天的死结
最后一根松动的线
当安全的地方不再安全
危险也不那么危险
欲望的出口
与理智的入口之间
立着一个
箭头
eh en... A little bit slippery; which usually preludes misleading. :) Maybe it's due to I read too much between the lines :) - Re: 直接posted on 03/31/2005
That's how we read poems, right? Why question yourself?:-)
Maybe it's due to I read too much between the lines :) - Re: 直接posted on 03/31/2005
benben wrote:
That's how we read poems, right? Why question yourself?:-)
Why not question myself? good question. :) let me think a bit, eh, too many metephors seem competiting to drag ethical orthodxes into vulgar fantacies. You are jealoue of the moral highlands, aren't you? :-)
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